Adventures in punctuation   

Dear John:   
       I want a man who knows what love is all about.   
You are generous, kind, thoughtful.  People who are not   
like you admit to being useless and inferior.  You have   
ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no   
feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever   
happy--will you let me be yours?   
Jane   

Dear John:   
       I want a man who knows what love is.  All about   
you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who are not like   
you. Admit to being useless and inferior.  You have ruined   
me.  For other men, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings   
whatsoever. When we're apart, I can be forever happy.   
Will you let me be?   
Yours,   
Jane